An exciting advanture

Write an answer to one of the questions in this part.
Write your answer in about 100 words on your answer sheet.
Mark the question number in the box at the top of your answer sheet.

Question 1

This is part of a letter you receive from an penfriend.

now write a letter giving your friend some advice
Write your letter on your answer sheet.

Bài mẫu

Bài mẫu A

Examiner Comments: This is a very good attempt, showing confident use of language in an appropriate letter of advice. The range of structures and vocabulary used is wide and occasionally above PET level. Errors are minor, due to ambition and all non-impeding, for example do a big difference. The letter reads very naturally.

Band: 5

Bài mẫu B

Examiner Comments: This answer is ambitious but Hawed by a high number of errors, some of which are quite basic, for example, Don't forgot about sport. As a letter, it flows and contains some excellent touches. for example the encouragement at the close, Be strong girl There is evidence of a range of vocabulary, for example, body and soul. It is also quite well organised and would have been in a higher band, had the accuracy been better.

Band: 3

Bài mẫu C

Examiner Comments: This is a good attempt, showing fairly ambitious use of language and a more than adequate range of vocabulary, including nouns and expressions relevant to the topic, for example junk foods, vitamins, keep in shape. It is well organised and linked, requiring no effort by the reader. There are however, some non-impeding errors.

Band: 4

Question 2

Your English teacher wants you to write a story
Your story must begin with this sentence: An exciting adventure
Write your story in about 100 words on your answer sheet

Bài mẫu

Bài mẫu A

Examiner Comments: This is a good attempt at a story, but due to the erratic control shown is held in Band 2. There are numerous errors, particularly in the use or absence) of past tenses, as well as problems with word order in sentences. Some effort is required by the reader.

Band: 2

Bài mẫu B

Examiner Comments: This is a very good answer, showing confident and ambitious use of language. The story, a first-person narrative, is appropriate to the title and is well organised. There is a good range of accurately-produced tenses and some range of vocabulary. Errors are minor, non-impeding and mainly in spelling, for example, begining...beachs.

Band: 5

Bài mẫu C

Examiner Comments: This is an adequate attempt, although the mis-copying in the title is an unfortunate start. There are a number of mainly non-impeding errors and the range used is adequate for the task set. There is some attempt at organisation, including a suitable ending (even it inaccurately produced).

Band: 3